Date: 04 Jun 2010 3:20 pm Title: Act III
Well written story. Victoria more than deserved everything that happened to her. Too bad she had to kill so many others in her futile attempts to beat a loving family. That Victoria had no clue that there were true werewolves and shapeshifters was a plus. And the only reason she got this far in the first place is because the Volturi were hoping she'd destroy a few members of the Cullen family so they wouldn't have to come up with some lame excuse to do so. Bella did the Third Wife thing well even if she didn't need to do so.
Date: 04 Jun 2010 2:42 pm Title: Act II
Such a pleasant and caring person. NOT!
Victoria is more overconfident than James, and with less reason. She'll sacrifice anyone and anything to have her own way. Not going to happen bitch. And yes the wolves would protect her forever. Just because you know nothing about love and family doesn't mean the rest of the world doesn't. You're in for a very big surprise. The last of your life.
Date: 07 Nov 2009 2:10 pm Title: Act III
Brrr! Being inside Victoria's head was unsettling.
You gave a very plausible scenario for what was happening in Victoria's life during this time. You have answers to a lot of events that we only get hints of. It fit extremely well with what we do know. I could mention many places where I thought it fit perfectly, but you already wrote it. But one I do want to comment on is the image in the last two chapter's, that Victoria was aware of what was happening to her, was very disconcerting.
You see Victoria's actions as being only partly from scheming, but more that she was just reacting based on her all-consuming hatred of the Cullens, and especially of Bella.
Date: 09 Sep 2009 10:02 pm Title: Act III
WoW! unexpectanly I enjoyed being in Victora's head, Almost felt sorry for her loseing James "Almost".
The end where her head is detached an she still sees Awesome.
Looking forward to reading anything ele ya write.
*Two Thumbs and Big toes up*