Date: 04 Jan 2011 2:19 pm Title: Chapter 8
I hadn't even discovered this site when you gave up. I'm sure I missed what would have been some more excellent writing to come.
Date: 04 Jan 2011 12:53 pm Title: Prologue
I liked this. It's a good beginning to a very loving story.
Date: 17 Sep 2010 8:49 pm Title: Chapter 8
Please, please carry on with this story, you are doing such a wonderful job!
Date: 17 Sep 2010 8:48 pm Title: Chapter 6
Aww, poor Esme! Hope it all goes back to normal for both her and Carlisle.
Date: 17 Sep 2010 8:44 pm Title: Chapter 4
Shows what a selfish young man Edward really was. Good that he suddenly realised that he should behave more like a gentleman. Good story so far.
Date: 17 Sep 2010 8:34 pm Title: Chapter 2
Esme did really have a tough life! Just as well that Carlisle changed her!
Date: 17 Sep 2010 8:23 pm Title: Chapter 1
Poor Carlisle, this must have been soo hard for him. What a shock it must have been to see that it was Esme that was dying.
Date: 04 Jul 2010 3:59 pm Title: Chapter 8
liked what I read. Maybe someday something will inspire you to write more.
Date: 04 Jul 2010 3:58 pm Title: Chapter 6
Good chapter. Like your progression.
Date: 04 Jul 2010 3:33 pm Title: Chapter 4
Nice. Like the way the relationships are building between the three.