Date: 03 Nov 2010 11:23 pm Title: Chapter 1
That's really cute. Quote back at him from your favorite book and drive him crazy.
Date: 12 Dec 2009 3:20 am Title: Chapter 1
I really liked the second half. Emmett, Mator, Mac and tractor tipping. :-D
Date: 29 Nov 2009 10:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
thats good it made me laugh you seem good
Date: 11 Nov 2009 2:43 pm Title: Chapter 1
thats a funny story hope the next one will even be more funnier
Date: 07 Nov 2009 11:56 am Title: Chapter 1
I enjoyed this. Very cute and funny. I would agree with some of the other reviews that the beginning is a bit choppy and Bella is being a little too open about her feelings with someone else in the room. I'd also put a little more of Edward's thought proceeses in since he does overthink just about everything. Overall though, great job!




[Report This]Date: 07 May 2009 12:58 pm Title: Chapter 1
Cute. quick funny. I can so see Emmett quoting movies to just bug Edward!




[Report This]Date: 06 Mar 2009 11:12 pm Title: Chapter 1
I LOVE IT!!! AMAZING COMPARISON!!



[Report This]Date: 04 Mar 2009 4:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
*snicker* "Float like a cadillac, sting like a beamer" This story is cute.




[Report This]Date: 01 Mar 2009 8:05 pm Title: Chapter 1
I loved, super fluffy and very funny