Date: 17 Mar 2009 11:11 pm Title: Chapter 1
Aaah. Love it. I need to catch up on your other pieces, but loved it. "Positively scandalous photos". Fabulous. I really, really liked that they decided to go out into broad daylight. I thought that was a nice touch, and I can totally see them doing that. It was really cute and upbeat and chipper... and it was really sweet and sentimental, too. It made me smile. Thank you.
Date: 01 Mar 2009 12:21 am Title: Chapter 1
Its simply Sweet. Just kind of a float along and whistle story. It didn't blow me off my feet as I expected from you, but Its nice. Just one of those things you can sigh about and then keep on whistling. I really like the ending metophore, which I didn't get until now, as I coming back to review this. Its almost sad in a small way, but kind of defiant of that sadness. Like a silver lining alost, except that the lining is mostly and the cloud is only some. Anyway, I like it. Ginger.
Author's Response: Simply sweet? Thank you! :) I'm so glad you liked it!