Reviews For Predator
Reviewer: Gabriel Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2010 10:43 pm Title: Pathetic
Date: 05 Apr 2010 10:43 pm Title: Pathetic
Apart from 2am in the morning, I enjoyed this uicy tale of death and destruction! Thank you!
Reviewer: RosalieLillian Signed 
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Date: 14 May 2009 5:03 pm Title: Pathetic
[Report This]Date: 14 May 2009 5:03 pm Title: Pathetic
hope you write some more... i like it!
Reviewer: Aggie Signed 
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Date: 12 May 2009 2:55 pm Title: Pathetic
[Report This]Date: 12 May 2009 2:55 pm Title: Pathetic
I like it. I two think Rose's thought are not in the correct time. I hope you are writing the next chapter.
Meg
Reviewer: dsolo Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2009 1:48 pm Title: Pathetic
[Report This]Date: 09 May 2009 1:48 pm Title: Pathetic
Interesting story, but your thoughts for Rosalie are too modern. For example "hot girl" was not used in the 1930s. I like the last line. Keep up the good work.
Author's Response: this story was told in past tense, rosalie didn't have to be thinking it in the 30s.
thanks for the review :]
Reviewer: DanceDanceDance Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 May 2009 9:51 pm Title: Pathetic
[Report This]Date: 07 May 2009 9:51 pm Title: Pathetic
I read this on Twilight Archives, but didn't review. This is really good. Hope read more soon!