Date: 03 Nov 2010 11:15 pm Title: Chapter 1
Really, really funny. Loved it.
Date: 23 Apr 2010 1:13 pm Title: Chapter 1
I forgot to say that the characters are so much like Bella and Edward. As I read, I could see them.
Date: 23 Apr 2010 1:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
I liked it even better this time! I smiled the whole time! =)
Date: 12 Dec 2009 3:12 am Title: Chapter 1
Interesting snippet.
The twist at the end was unexpected.
Date: 11 Oct 2009 6:50 pm Title: Chapter 1
I liked this story. I can see this conversation between the two of them. I liked the Yoga idea. Bella can use all the help she can get with balance, breathing, etc. Also, I found that I enjoyed the 3rd party writing style. It is a nice change knowing what both characters are thinking. Nice story.
[Report This]Date: 03 Aug 2009 11:58 pm Title: Chapter 1
I'm sorry. I just don't like this story. I just doensn't seem like Edward and Bella to me. It is a pretty short story and I actually fell asleep reading it...no joke. I'm sorry to admit it and I am not laughing at you because you are a great writer. I just didn't see Edward and Bella in your writing.
Author's Response: I'm so sorry my story put you to sleep. Thank you for letting me know how odious it is. In future, I will make sure to attempt to embody your personal interpretation in my writing so as to battle your no doubt insurmountable narcolepsy, which can only be a subconscious recognition of inferior authors. I beg your utmost pardon.
[Report This]Date: 08 Jul 2009 1:50 pm Title: Chapter 1
Yoga! well that could come in handy.
[Report This]Date: 03 Jun 2009 12:50 pm Title: Chapter 1
Cute.. not so angsty
[Report This]Date: 01 Jun 2009 12:06 pm Title: Chapter 1
:). It's cute and I like that he's probably just finished paying for her gas no matter what she says. :)