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Reviewer: Siriusmunchkin Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2010 3:15 am Title: Chapter 1

Really, really funny. Loved it.

Reviewer: Gabriel Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2010 9:19 am Title: Chapter 1

Most amusing!

Reviewer: Kagey Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2010 5:13 pm Title: Chapter 1

I forgot to say that the characters are so much like Bella and Edward. As I read, I could see them.

Reviewer: Kagey Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2010 5:09 pm Title: Chapter 1

I liked it even better this time! I smiled the whole time! =)

Reviewer: Kagey Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2009 8:12 am Title: Chapter 1

Interesting snippet.
The twist at the end was unexpected.

Reviewer: Still Heart Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2009 10:50 pm Title: Chapter 1

I liked this story. I can see this conversation between the two of them. I liked the Yoga idea. Bella can use all the help she can get with balance, breathing, etc. Also, I found that I enjoyed the 3rd party writing style. It is a nice change knowing what both characters are thinking. Nice story.

Reviewer: lorilynn74 Signed starhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2009 3:58 am Title: Chapter 1

I'm sorry. I just don't like this story. I just doensn't seem like Edward and Bella to me. It is a pretty short story and I actually fell asleep reading it...no joke. I'm sorry to admit it and I am not laughing at you because you are a great writer. I just didn't see Edward and Bella in your writing.

Author's Response: I'm so sorry my story put you to sleep. Thank you for letting me know how odious it is. In future, I will make sure to attempt to embody your personal interpretation in my writing so as to battle your no doubt insurmountable narcolepsy, which can only be a subconscious recognition of inferior authors. I beg your utmost pardon.

Reviewer: silkoverglass Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2009 5:50 pm Title: Chapter 1

Yoga! well that could come in handy.

Reviewer: Aggie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2009 4:50 pm Title: Chapter 1

Cute.. not so angsty

Reviewer: Lique Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2009 4:06 pm Title: Chapter 1

:). It's cute and I like that he's probably just finished paying for her gas no matter what she says. :)

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