Date: 11 Oct 2009 6:50 pm Title: Chapter 1
I liked this story. I can see this conversation between the two of them. I liked the Yoga idea. Bella can use all the help she can get with balance, breathing, etc. Also, I found that I enjoyed the 3rd party writing style. It is a nice change knowing what both characters are thinking. Nice story.
Date: 03 Aug 2009 11:58 pm Title: Chapter 1
I'm sorry. I just don't like this story. I just doensn't seem like Edward and Bella to me. It is a pretty short story and I actually fell asleep reading it...no joke. I'm sorry to admit it and I am not laughing at you because you are a great writer. I just didn't see Edward and Bella in your writing.
Author's Response: I'm so sorry my story put you to sleep. Thank you for letting me know how odious it is. In future, I will make sure to attempt to embody your personal interpretation in my writing so as to battle your no doubt insurmountable narcolepsy, which can only be a subconscious recognition of inferior authors. I beg your utmost pardon.