Date: 20 May 2011 4:41 am Title: Ghosts of the Past
Oh I'm so glad you gave Bella's point of view on this initial meeting! And "Stupid, dazzling vampires in their hot cars."...Wow! You surprised me on that one. Either you made a slip (ha,ha), or you are trying to make me stay up into the wee hours of the night!
Date: 19 May 2011 4:20 am Title: Homecoming
Whew! I'm getting anxious for them to meet. Some of the things I liked in this chap.: 1) Edward & Jasper's relationship 2) Alice's blackout - the wolves? 3) Definitely keeping Rose in character.
Looking forward to the next chapter!