Date: 14 Jul 2010 10:40 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Jacob's Note
Very very good.
Date: 29 Apr 2010 11:45 am Title: Chapter 1 - Jacob's Note
A good job of capturing Jacob.
[Report This]Date: 20 Oct 2007 9:31 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Jacob's Note
wow,
this was so good!!
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
[Report This]Date: 20 Oct 2007 9:31 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Jacob's Note
wow,
this was so good!!
Author's Response: Thanks :D
[Report This]Date: 20 Oct 2007 1:36 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Jacob's Note
It's nice to get an idea of what the other character's besides Bella are thinking. i thought this was very well written, It was like I was Jacob and I was feeling what he was feeling.
Author's Response: That's wonderful! What every writer wants - the character to be real and believable. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!!!
[Report This]Date: 13 Sep 2007 1:15 am Title: Chapter 1 - Jacob's Note
You know after reading Eclipse you get a better view of how Jacob really is and I fell in love with him. This is a great story you captured his essence and that is awesome! Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!! Jacob is definitely revealed in Eclipse...he was fun to read. Thanks again for the review!
[Report This]Date: 26 Aug 2007 4:14 am Title: Chapter 1 - Jacob's Note
that was so beautiful ...its as if you know jacob yourself caue i couldnt posibly discribe his point of view better...that was amasing loved it!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much...having some one enjoy your work is one of the greatest feelings in the world...so thank you for your review!
[Report This]Date: 04 Jul 2007 7:37 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Jacob's Note
I love Jacob! This is how I perceive him too. Great job!
Author's Response: Well thank you very much! I have another Jake fic coming up so stay tuned!
Date: 24 Jun 2007 8:05 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Jacob's Note
beautifully written. you have really captured Jacob's character. i quite enjoyed reading it.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the kind words! I'm just discovering what a great character Jacob is to right - I'm glad that i got him right in your eyes!!!
Author's Response: I'm just discovering what a great character Jacob is to WRITE - GAH! It's late! Forgive me!
[Report This]Date: 22 Jun 2007 8:05 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Jacob's Note
I truly enjoyed your version of what Jacob might have gone through when he was answering Bella's note. It was insightful and fit right in with his character. I am looking forward to reading the next chapters.
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it and that it was in character...I think that's one of the things you strive to accomplish in fanfic writing! I'm excited for the following chapters as well and I can't wait to see what happens in Eclipse!