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Reviewer: Siriusmunchkin Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2010 1:27 am Title: Chapter 1

Priceless. Never have understood the desire for children. My views are probably worse than Bella's. If they weren't so darn cute the world would have ended long ago.

Reviewer: Gabriel Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2010 9:04 am Title: Chapter 1

Amusing! Thank you!

Reviewer: Kagey Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2009 2:43 pm Title: Chapter 1

Cute, and funny and serious.
Edward jealous of a toddler?

Reviewer: SlightlyObsessed Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2009 5:12 am Title: Chapter 1

I love the comment "he has remarkable aim for a two year old". That's too funny!!

Reviewer: SlightlyObsessed Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2009 5:12 am Title: Chapter 1

I love the comment "he has remarkable aim for a two year old". That's too funny!!

Reviewer: AliceC Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Sep 2009 3:36 pm Title: Chapter 1

will there be more?^^

Reviewer: lorilynn74 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2009 9:33 am Title: Chapter 1

That was great. Too funny. Eddie??? Ha ha ha

Reviewer: silkoverglass Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2009 1:52 pm Title: Chapter 1

Aw, lil'Ed is a lil' nightmare! Good job

Reviewer: KatyMcLain Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2009 4:44 pm Title: Chapter 1

hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahhaa That was halarious Hahahahahahahaha! He hahahaha Had ahahah cherois ahahahahahahahaha in ahahah his ahahahaha hair!ahahahahahahahahaha!

Reviewer: Shmexymedic Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 May 2009 11:58 pm Title: Chapter 1

Very Cute and it works so well with the original foreshadowing. Well done :)

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