Reviews For I Won't Hurt Her
Reviewer: MotherAtHeart Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2008 5:40 pm Title: Chapter 1
Date: 14 Oct 2008 5:40 pm Title: Chapter 1
you did a really good job capturing the emotion of not only jacob but sam too, thanks for the story
Reviewer: dsolo Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2008 9:57 pm Title: Chapter 1
Date: 29 Jul 2008 9:57 pm Title: Chapter 1
Good job of showing Jacob's pain. Need to work on your grammar/vocabulary a bit, but overall well written. Should have used wound, not winded - first paragraph too wordy. Story rapidly improves after that and ending was great.
Reviewer: Clarissa Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2007 12:39 am Title: Chapter 1
Date: 05 Aug 2007 12:39 am Title: Chapter 1
Mann alive, could you be any more angsty? We could really use some more angst here.
It was awesome, I love it, keep going.
Reviewer: enoughforever Signed 
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Date: 04 Aug 2007 10:13 pm Title: Chapter 1
[Report This]Date: 04 Aug 2007 10:13 pm Title: Chapter 1
oh that really tugged at the Jacob loving side of my heart! he was crying! i think you did a great job exposing how Jake was really feeling in that chapter of new moon where he 'breaks up' with bella.
Reviewer: angel_of_music23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2007 1:06 pm Title: Chapter 1
[Report This]Date: 04 Aug 2007 1:06 pm Title: Chapter 1
oh man. Poor Jake. this was really well written!