[Report This]Date: 17 Jul 2008 1:31 pm Title: Final Battle
This has to be my favorite AU story. I hated reading it at the same time as being drawn deeper into the story. You did a great job of staying true to characters that were well established while changing the background so dramatically. I know Bella's character was extremely different from the book but as of yet SM has not made her a vampire so technically she is not out of character. Wow! Thank you for putting so much time into this story.
Author's Response: Thank you for your review! And thank you for your kind words. I'm happy you liked the story, I had a fun time writing it.
Date: 05 Jul 2008 11:13 pm Title: Final Battle
it was a horrible (as in horror kind of horrible, not terribly written horrible) story but... (yes there has to be a but)
but I find your fanfic WAY too OOC for it to even be a fanfic. I mean, it's kind of like you're just borrowing the characters names and turning the whole twilight universe upsidedown not even staying true to twilight at all.in the future, if you continue to write AUs, try staying more true to the actual characters.
♥natasha
Author's Response: Thank you for your review but the owners of this Site would not have invited me to post my story if it was TOO OOC.
[Report This]Date: 02 Jul 2008 8:27 pm Title: Final Battle
Okay I can say a few things about this.
1. I loved the very beginning.
2. It was a very good and well writen story.
3. Even though through the story I kept thinking to myself, I hate this story, its not right, that was a lie to myself because I didnt think what was wrote was write, but this is your imagination, its right to you if this were to happen, and so its right to me.
4. That made my cry with saddness at the end, I obviously really like Alice, but its ending made sence. good job.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and Reviewing. I'm happy you liked it. I'm shocked people are still reading this 2 years after it's been finished.
[Report This]Date: 25 Jun 2008 11:41 am Title: The Crash
you have gotten a lot of reviews for this story, and i know most of them are very positive. This is a very interesting plot, and you write it well. However, there isn't enough description of this unfamiliar world you've created. You change a lot about Twilight, and don't explain why, or what is going on. However, it's very original and interesting.
Sorry if I sounded mean... i wasn't trying to.
[Report This]Date: 18 Jun 2008 5:19 pm Title: Epilogue
Holy crud I just finished this and it was hoorrid in a good way... I'm almost scared to find out what happens to Bella, when she does become a vampire! I really loved it though it was very creative and had alot of emotion, I cried for a half an hour when Bella left. This is truly AMAZING. Keep up the good work.10 out of 10
Author's Response: Thank you! I love getting reviews where people are nice. lol. Most tend to freak out and scream at me.
[Report This]Date: 09 Jun 2008 9:29 am Title: Epilogue
this story is amazing!!! it was sooo sad and WOW.... i love it soooo much u are very talented!!!keep writing!
Date: 08 Jun 2008 1:39 pm Title: The Crash
okay. so maybe u didnt respond to reviews that much. i just hope u read it.
Date: 08 Jun 2008 1:36 pm Title: The Crash
i no u havent reviewed since october or around there.......... but still. do u read the reviews at all?? u were always answering them before......... so i hope u hear this:
it was an amazing story!! it kind of held a resemblance to what i think SM was thinking of with her "700 page epic sequel to Twilight that didnt work for many reasons." i hope that a comparison to SM's work is a compliment... cuz that's what it's suposed to b. anyway, i absolutely loved the story!!! poor alice and jasper, tho..... but life happens, i suppose.
Author's Response: I do still try and respond when I can. I've had a very busy year and my account on here got a little messed up when they moved things around. It still shocks me that people read this! There have been nearly 3 books since I wrote this and I had no idea the people that would be brought in through New Moon. You can imagine my shock when I read Jane...
[Report This]Date: 05 Jun 2008 2:51 pm Title: Lets Get Ready
Oh!!!!!!!!!!!! GOD I HATE YOU!!!!!! You just have to write so dam well don't you.....Your story has to be so good it depresses me horribly....stupid pixie. Its so depressing. If you don't mind, im going to try to never think of this story again. if you didn't write it so well, it would be easier for me to not think of that as what will happen. For my sake, I wish you were a much worse writer. Dam you, Pixie. Damn vous tous en enfer.
~Ginger.
Author's Response: LOL I love reviews like this. I pride my self on making people cry, it's a whole lot easier to make some one laugh than cry. I'm glad you liked it, and don't worry I've made many a person mad with this story. It just still shocks me people still read it. It was wrote almost 2 years ago...
[Report This]Date: 01 Jun 2008 11:56 am Title: The Crash
I really liked this one its great I loved Charlotte shes fab a lot nicer than the vampire Bella I really felt sorry for Edward well written (and for emmet jasper alice and all the rest of them)!!!!! ;) 10/10 fab