Date: 06 Sep 2010 6:52 am Title: Jasper
Nice one Jasper! Again, well written!
Date: 06 Sep 2010 6:49 am Title: Quil
Very nice! An interesting look into the wolves thinking! Well done!
Date: 13 May 2010 1:50 pm Title: Jasper
Watching Jasper and Alice would be a lot of fun.
Date: 13 May 2010 1:44 pm Title: Quil
Quil is a sweetie.
Date: 11 Mar 2010 3:28 am Title: Jasper
Both chapters were great! I wish there was more.
Date: 06 Jan 2010 6:56 pm Title: Jasper
I like how you show Jasper.
That you how that he still thought about the horror that was his life long ago, is very good.
I like this chapter a lot!
Date: 27 Jun 2008 2:33 pm Title: Jasper
*sigh* I love Jasper. You wrote his character well. I really liked how you wrote his feelings and relationship with Alice. J/A is my second favorite 'ship; it's minutely behind E/B. Great job!
Author's Response: Jasper is my favourite character. We know a lot more about him after Eclipse, but I loved that he seemed like a very complex character behind what we saw in the books.
Thanks for reviewing!
dragon-girl
Date: 27 Jun 2008 2:26 pm Title: Quil
I really enjoyed Quil's POV. His ruminations of the Cullen clan (and Bella) were interesting to read. Nice job!
Author's Response: Thank you!
I had great fun writing from Quil's POV. The pack mind was really interesting to write about - if I've got time and an idea sometime, I'll maybe write a story about the pack.
Thanks for the review!
dragon-girl
Date: 20 Jun 2008 4:26 pm Title: Quil
I loved Quil's POV. It's a very well written story.
Author's Response: Thanks. I liked writing about Quill & the Pack.
[Report This]Date: 22 May 2008 6:18 pm Title: Jasper
Loved both chapters, especially Jasper's feelings about Alice. You did the wolves POV very well. Would like to see more.
Author's Response: Thanks!
More from the wolves, or more from this story?