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Reviewer: twi_fanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jan 2009 12:39 am Title: Chapter 1

i think u did really good! i wouldnt have noticed which side the scars were on! coulda fooled me!

Author's Response: lol thanks! I didn't notice it myself until someone told me,.

Reviewer: Twilight_Addict Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2008 6:33 am Title: Chapter 1

i think your skill is definately improving. your body feautures are in great porportion too.

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: MeltingSun Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2008 11:11 pm Title: Chapter 1

Nice job on the mouth. Try as i might, I could never picture it in my head but you've pulled it off flawlessly.

Author's Response: Wow, thank you, so, so much. I'm glad I helped you see her...or captured your vision of her...or something.

Reviewer: dark_phantom Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2008 11:25 pm Title: Chapter 1

yowch. poor emily.

Author's Response: Yep. Being around werewolves has it's *ahem* consequences.

Reviewer: obsidian_eyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2008 8:32 pm Title: Chapter 1

i like her hair


Author's Response: Thank you.

Reviewer: Ren Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2008 1:25 pm Title: Chapter 1

For me, when I draw, I have to pick a definite point to put a light source. Either in front of her, behind her, or off to one side. Something you can do is stand in the mirror and hold a lamp in a similar position and look to see how the shadows play across your own body. I use myself as a model all the time. Shadows will always follow the contours of the body unless they've been cast by something else entirely. You have a huge amount of potential here, and I'm excited to see how it develops. Hang in there. :)

Author's Response: Thanks =] I'll be sure to take that innot account =]

Reviewer: Edward_Will_Win Signed starstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2008 12:14 pm Title: Chapter 1

You need to work on your shading a bit. put a little more effort and time into these and they could be great!

Author's Response: Okay =] I think my problem is I have trouble visualizing lightinhg, so I'm not sure where to put the shadows.

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