



[Report This]Date: 30 Oct 2010 7:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
As sad as this story is, it's happy too. Of course I wish that Bella and Edward would get to be together but that happened in a way at the end.
This story really reminded me of the movie "Tuck Everlasting", which made me cry too. I didn't think I would when I finished the story but then I looked up the song that you based it off of and started to bawl. I had never heard that song before and I really like it. It's stuck in my head now.
Great job and thanks for the story.
Date: 30 Aug 2010 1:23 am Title: Chapter 1
Quite different, but not bad at all!
Date: 12 May 2010 5:13 pm Title: Chapter 1
Creative and sad.




[Report This]Date: 24 Mar 2009 9:23 pm Title: Chapter 1
i dont get the end but i really like it




[Report This]Date: 16 Feb 2009 2:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
this was wonderous writing, it made me sad, but it was beautiful!




[Report This]Date: 16 Feb 2009 2:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
this was wonderous writing, it made me sad, but it was beautiful!
Date: 26 Jan 2009 9:58 pm Title: Chapter 1
OK after i read this story i had to go to youtube and listen to the song that inspired it and wow it matched it exactly. very well done. you should keep writing




[Report This]Date: 26 Jan 2009 9:46 pm Title: Chapter 1
i loved it. so sweet. the end was... was... was, WOW. i loved it.




[Report This]Date: 21 Jan 2009 6:02 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow......... Just wow.