Date: 02 Nov 2010 4:48 am Title: Daddy
Well written insight into Charlie's side of the event. You can see how he would be looking at Renee. Easy to picture Bella throwing things around and yelling why she can't leave. And then Bella calling him Daddy. Sad.
Date: 10 May 2010 1:53 am Title: Daddy
Emotionally draining. And just as I imagined it to be.
Date: 12 Apr 2010 12:42 pm Title: Daddy
Very well written. I was there, in the head of a heartbroken daddy. :*(**
Date: 06 Nov 2009 10:16 am Title: Daddy
I really like this story. Charlie is so much more than he appears to be. We see him mostly through Bella's eyes and thoughts, and most children do not appreciate what their parents go through on their behalf. This was really good.
[Report This]Date: 02 Nov 2009 10:45 am Title: Daddy
Wow. That is really good. You can really write. it was almost as well written as Stephanie Meyer's work.
[Report This]Date: 18 Aug 2009 11:04 am Title: Daddy
I have to say that I really wasn't going to read this. For some reason I thought I would be boring but I was wrong. You are a wonderful writer and I was actually crying along with Bella. I am very glad I read this. And I am very glad to give you a rating of a 10.
[Report This]Date: 13 Feb 2009 4:32 pm Title: Daddy
This is so good. And I'm so jealous! I wish I knew Stephenie well enough to get her to critique my writing!
[Report This]Date: 13 Feb 2009 4:32 pm Title: Daddy
This is so good. And I'm so jealous! I wish I knew Stephenie well enough to get her to critique my writing!
[Report This]Date: 19 Oct 2008 4:22 am Title: Daddy
you did an amazing job, i can actually see the scene in my head and i'm crying right now, the pain charlie is experiencing is heartbreaking
[Report This]Date: 16 Oct 2008 9:26 pm Title: Daddy
that's sad, made me cry...it was a good story though.