Date: 19 May 2010 10:49 pm Title: Chapter 1
Moose Head Lake is nice. So's Carabassett. That would have some good hunting grounds. It would be fun to see Emmett and Jasper at Fenway. I would guess the upper Grandstand seats back from first or thirdbase would be their favorite. Less chance of accidently being in the sun. Looks like Alice and Rosalie are going to have a fun trip. Even if Rosalie didn't like Carrie all that much I doubt she would have liked Salem's Lot either. Wonder what she'll do to the car the Volturi are going to lend them? Bet it'll work better after she's done.
Date: 11 Feb 2009 7:47 pm Title: Chapter 3
Oooh I love the ending! Even if it isn't canon. I'm assuming this was written before Breaking Dawn, anyway. And who cares if her dress was Vera Wang or some lesser known designer.
Author's Response: Yes, it was and she didn't know who would be marrying Edward, so once Bella came along, the dress changed to the one she eventually wore.
Date: 12 Jul 2008 1:47 pm Title: Chapter 1
I don't think Alice or Rosalie ever met the Volturi before. Aro acted like it was the first time he met her in NM. Other than that, story is pretty good so far.
Author's Response: Which is why I had them only meet with one of the Volturi's representatives. :) Thanks.
Date: 11 Jul 2008 7:37 pm Title: Chapter 3
Mmmm... I highly doubt Alice would be able to see that far into the future... and why would she be able to see Edward but not Bella?
But still, very good writing, and I thought Bella was especially in character.
Author's Response: I've never seen it specified one way or another. And she Sees Edward because he's decided that marriage is something that he would want, so it's one of those things where it's just a matter of time before the rest of the picture comes into focus. Thanks again. I hadn't ever written Bella before this, so I'm glad she was in-character.