Date: 13 Apr 2009 2:35 am Title: Jake's wingmen
i always have trouble drawing people with their arms folded but you did a really great job! the only thing that bothers me are jacobs eyes. they look a tad cross eyed... but other then that great job! :)
Author's Response: I agree; Jake's eyes are a bit crossed. Thanks for the review!
Date: 12 Jul 2008 6:21 pm Title: Jake's wingmen
I think their heads looks a bit small in comparison to their bodies. Also, isn't Quil suppose to be the shorter, bulkier one?
Nice job, I especially love their skin coloring.
Author's Response: I think my problem was that I drew the heads after I drew the bodies. I agree; I should have made Quil beefier.
Date: 11 Jul 2008 3:14 pm Title: Jake's wingmen
i really like it, however there's a patch of discoloration between jake and embry.
Author's Response: Yes, the magic wand tool was not very happy with that section. I tried to fix it a few times, but gave up in frustration. I admit defeat. :D
Date: 11 Jul 2008 11:55 am Title: Jake's wingmen
I really like the colour of the background...now that I think about it, I would have used that for their skin; are they not a russet-coloured red? Nice expressions, it's very realistic how Jacob is all "cool and calm" while the other two (Quil and Embry?) are looking a touch uneasy. Good job on the muscles, also, although some other parts on their bodies, like their arms, neck and head, are a little out of preportion.
Author's Response: I'm happy I captured the right tone with Jake's expression. It's the only thing I'm actually happy with for this piece. I agree; the body parts are out of proportion. A lot of these earlier sketches have the same problem; I'm better with sizing now, but am hesitant to color any of my newer pieces until I get better technique. Thanks for your review!