Date: 18 May 2010 2:54 am Title: Dark Angel
Edward did say he fed very well for the years he was gone. And in the end he realized that he was as much a monster as the ones he fed from. Playing God didn't turn out as well as the thought it would.
Date: 18 May 2010 2:43 am Title: Avenging Angel
Edward being a rebellious teenager. That is a stretch from the Edward we know. But he is a vampire and vampires normally drink human blood. Experimentation is a teenager's greatest source of fun. And at least he decided to only experiment with people who were more evil than he was.
Date: 17 Feb 2010 8:48 am Title: Avenging Angel
Oh my gosh! This is an absolutely amzing story and a graet character excercise which fits in perfectly with Stephenie Meyer's original story! Well done!




[Report This]Date: 01 Apr 2009 8:55 pm Title: Dark Angel
Please write more! I have been reading your stories and love them. You make it easy to understand why Edward could convince himself that what he was doing was completely right and just. I'd love to see your take on him developing his conscience.




[Report This]Date: 19 Feb 2009 11:39 am Title: Avenging Angel
This is brilliant. I've yet to read a fic covering this topic... great idea!




[Report This]Date: 23 Dec 2008 1:48 am Title: Avenging Angel
i loved your story it was amazing. it made me shudder. i couldn't keep my eyes off the computer. JOB WELL DONE!! you should keep on writing




[Report This]Date: 29 Jul 2008 12:03 am Title: Dark Angel
This is so good. I love it.




[Report This]Date: 16 Jul 2008 4:28 pm Title: Avenging Angel
Wow, this is deep, yet it's well-written.
I love the woman's thoughts when Edward tells her to run. " He’s letting me go? He came for them? Her tears flowed anew. She looked at me more closely. He’s so pale he glows, even in this darkness. He’s an angel. God answered my prayer. He sent an angel to protect me. “Thank you. Thank you, sir,” she breathed before she stumbled away." I like it a lot.




[Report This]Date: 26 May 2008 7:45 pm Title: Dark Angel
Extremely well-written (like all of your fan fics). It follows edwards personality rediculously well.'Keep writing, I love your work.




[Report This]Date: 11 Apr 2008 11:24 pm Title: Dark Angel
oooooh, so bad, yet so good. Poor Edward.