Date: 11 Nov 2008 2:48 pm Title: Bella's Lullaby
That sort of sounded like Smeagal no offence I mean it was really good and I am glad that he decided that he loved her more than he loved the blood but still... It was really good and you should keep writing because I like what you write and I'm sure everyone else does too!
Date: 23 Jul 2008 8:40 pm Title: Bella's Lullaby
I'm assuming the italics aren't intentional? And 'masochistic' is spelled wrong, as is 'Stephenie'.
Otherwise, it was lovely. It seemed almost a bit disorientated, which I thought added a nice effect, as it portrayed the jumble occurring in Edward's head - man or monster??
Anyway, nice job.
Author's Response: If you mean the fact that half the fic is in italics, then yes- thats un-intentional. I have no idea why its doing that, and its like that on several of my fics XP Theres an 'e' in it? huh... I though she spelled it the way my friend does- but alas, I was mistaken. Oh well...as for masochism.. oops again. ^^ Thanks for the review!!