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Reviewer: Siriusmunchkin Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2010 9:53 pm Title: Chapter 1

Wrong place for you little girl. James was hungry and you provided a great snack.

Reviewer: Nightrose Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2008 7:21 pm Title: Chapter 1

i usually don't like fanpoems. i love this one.

Reviewer: Future_MrsCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2008 3:36 pm Title: Chapter 1

Ooooh . . . creepy!
But in a good way.
I felt like I was watching a little film.
Great job, keep it up!

~Future_MrsCullen

PS
I love how you reviewed your own work!
Ha ha ha
=D

Reviewer: ImprintedIsh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2008 12:40 pm Title: Chapter 1

I liked the descriiption of the chuckle as a "twisted metallic wheeze."

Reviewer: dsolo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2008 8:40 am Title: Chapter 1

Scary tone. Well done.

Reviewer: With the Wolves Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2008 6:34 am Title: Chapter 1

Wow...chilling! :D

Reviewer: Lilyfish Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2008 5:54 am Title: Chapter 1

I have always wanted to review my own work

Author's Response: Yes, isn't it fun?

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