[Report This]Date: 07 Aug 2008 9:19 am Title: Chapter 1
It's difficult to understand what you are trying to convey... the piece has so much going on at once. For example, what are the music notes for on the right side?
Author's Response: bella's lulaby
[Report This]Date: 07 Aug 2008 9:19 am Title: Chapter 1
It's difficult to understand what you are trying to convey... the piece has so much going on at once. For exampe, what are the music notes for on the right side?
Date: 31 Jul 2008 6:19 pm Title: Chapter 1
Where's the ice? Decent shading on the fire.
Author's Response: there isnt. I based it on the Poem in the begining of Eclipse. Jacob is fire, Edward is ice.
[Report This]Date: 30 Jul 2008 5:43 pm Title: Chapter 1
not really recognizable as bella, but i like her collarbones.
Author's Response: yeahh i know. i did this as a quick stetch, i think i ws either in class or supposed ot be doing my homework..loL! thnx so much
[Report This]Date: 29 Jul 2008 1:06 pm Title: Chapter 1
I like the eyes and the hair. Though the noce and head look too big for her. One of her hands looks too small. And I dont get the music notes. I do like that you put in the ring and wolf.
Author's Response: yeah, this was just a quick sketch. I thought it was alright. and the Music notes r for Bella's lullaby