Date: 11 May 2009 1:44 pm Title: Sisters and Spark Plugs
Great short story. When Bell's truck died I thought Rose was behind it, but with Alice some how... I love the way you had her just switch something simple in the engine.
Emmett as the voice was great. I too think he was not used enough in the book. I love the way you fleshed out their relationship, and her regrets.
Date: 31 Jul 2008 8:16 pm Title: Sisters and Spark Plugs
this one was very nice! specially the end...
oh and Emmet's thought process was just so sweet...
Author's Response: Thanks Aziel, I am so glad that you like it. Thanks for the review too!
Date: 30 Jul 2008 4:27 pm Title: Sisters and Spark Plugs
Love it! :) I've wondered what exactly happened to the truck to the point that I thought about issuing a challenge. I really enjoyed this take on it, AND you're right. Emmett was wonderful in this! :) Beautifully done!
Author's Response: Glad you liked it Eowyn77. Now I am sad that you didn't issue a challenge because I would totally have used this story. (Which has been kicking around on paper and in my head since May 31 and was only waiting for me to finish posting Of Dice and Den before it could debut.) Thanks so much for your kind review!