Date: 24 Sep 2009 1:12 pm Title: Making Dinner
It's sweet that Edward was interested in "the sounds of Bella's life".
I think you are right about why she was not as accident prone in the kitchen as she seemed to be everywhere else.
This sounds like the same Edward we know from Midnight Sun.
Date: 30 Oct 2008 6:27 am Title: Making Dinner
What a delightful window into a normal day for Edward and Bella during this time! I loved it! I think you did a wonderful job of capturing his curiosity, his protectiveness, and his love for her. Wow!
Author's Response: Thank you very much! <3
Date: 29 Oct 2008 12:36 am Title: Making Dinner
Good last line. "I'm not a stalker."
It's a bit of a cliche story, but still very cute. (Mine are probably really cliche too.) I like that he worries about her while she's cooking.
It does somehow now seem surprising that she doesn't cut herself while cooking at some point. She's that clumsy every where else.
Author's Response: Her ability in the kitchen always seemed weird to me - every time she'd be in the kitchen, I'd be reading and holding my breath, expecting her to slice off a finger or something, with disastrous consequences.