Penname: Butterscotch [Contact] Real name: Erin
Member Since: 16 Dec 2006
Membership status: Member
Bio:
My real name is Erin, and I'm a 26-year-old SAHM. I'm sorry that I'm unable to reply to reviews anymore, but I still read every one. I'm currently working on original fiction and trying to publish a novel. I don't yet have plans to write more fanfiction... although someday I might write a sequel to "Edward Vs the Toddler." When I wrote the original, I never thought Edward and Bella would actually have a toddler of their own someday!

For more information about me or my current writing projects, check out my website, http://emrowan.com, or my blog, http://emrowan.livejournal.com/. Thank you for your interest!


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Summary: FeatureThe first chapter occurs before Rose's telephone call, and from Chapter 2 on is after her phone call about Bella jumping to her death. I have been following the book, so dialog in quotes belongs completely to Stephenie Meyer.
Categories: New Moon
Characters: Alice Cullen, Aro, Caius, Carlisle Cullen, Charlie Swan, Demetri, Edward Cullen, Emmett Cullen, Esme Cullen, Felix, Heidi, Jane, Marcus, Rosalie Hale
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 89730 Read Count: 19909
[Report This] Published: 25 Aug 2006 Updated: 28 Nov 2007
Reviewer: Butterscotch Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Jan 2007 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Enlightenment

This third chapter has been my favorite so far. It rang true for me and seemed what Edward really would be thinking. This story would be very sad if I didn't know it had a happy ending. :) Great job!

Author's Response: I am glad you are enjoying the story. Thanks for the review on this chapter and I am happy to hear you liked it so much. I will try to keep up the good work.

Summary: Edward decides he can't live without Bella and seeks the Volturi's help. The events that happened after Rosalie's phone call.





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Categories: New Moon
Characters: Alice Cullen, Bella Swan Cullen, Carlisle Cullen, Edward Cullen, Emmett Cullen, Esme Cullen, Rosalie Hale
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 33540 Read Count: 4296
[Report This] Published: 23 Nov 2006 Updated: 23 May 2007
Reviewer: Butterscotch Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Apr 2007 Title: Chapter 14: The Proposal

Congratulations on finishing your story! I've been reading all along and enjoying Edward's POV. I especially liked this last chapter, which must have been tough to write. It's interesting to think about Edward's thoughts during the marriage proposal. Overall, great job!

Author's Response: IT was really hard to write because I was unsure of his motives adn I have no idea why she says no, so I had to be creative with the reasoning. Thanks for reading. I am glad you liked it.

Peonies by silly_bella Rated: PG13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 750]
Summary: Bella never jumped. Alice had no vision. Edward didn't return to Forks. Would Bella live the normal, happy human life Edward wanted for her?



A special thanks to Be My Escape, who encouraged... strongly encouraged... me to write the story when I thought no one would want to read it, and who has read every chapter and challenged me to make them each better.
Categories: Alternative Universe
Characters: Alice Cullen, Bella Swan Cullen, Carlisle Cullen, Edward Cullen, Emmett Cullen, Esme Cullen, Jacob Black, Rosalie Hale
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 29513 Read Count: 18500
[Report This] Published: 25 Nov 2006 Updated: 29 Jan 2007
Reviewer: Butterscotch Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Dec 2006 Title: Chapter 9: Here There Be Dragons

I am a new member, so I just finished reading all of your stories. I enjoyed all of them, especially the ones that made me laugh, like "Hot Stuff" and "Easily Entertained." But I also like "Peonies," because it's so bittersweet. I just love your writing style in general. I look forward to your future postings.

Author's Response: Thank you very much. You\'ve had a busy read! I\'m glad you like the stories -- this one is much more difficult to write thatn the funny bits -- or even the angsty one-shots. Thanks for reading.

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Date: 18 Dec 2006 Title: Chapter 10: Make a Wilderness and Call It Peace

I like the ackwardness between Edward and Jacob. I'm really looking forward to the cookout. :) I was also wondering, what happened to Bella's mom? Is she still alive?

Author's Response: Edward\'s wondering that, too. Jacob already knows what\'s up with Renée. (Think about it. Bella has spent a large part of her life taking care of her mother.) I figure that no matter how polite Jacob and Edward might be, they are still enemies. Right now they have a common goal. But they are still enemies. The cookout should prove interesting.

Reviewer: Butterscotch Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Jan 2007 Title: Chapter 15: Life Story

Just one thing seemed odd to me. At the very beginning, Alice is thinking about people she killed. But I was under the impression she had never drank human blood before. If I'm wrong, just ignore me. Otherwise, I thought the chapter was perfect. It seemed exactly what Alice would be thinking. Amazing job!

Author's Response: Edward told Bella that they all fall off the wagon sometimes. I\'m assuming that means all of them (except Carlisle, since Edward had already explained that he never had) -- at least, until I hear something that contradicts that from Stephenie. Glad you liked it. Next up is an Edward POV.

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Date: 22 Jan 2007 Title: Chapter 20: Into the Breach

I think "suspense" is an understatement for describing this chapter. You're so funny; you have everyone wrapped around your little finger. As I said before, I think you enjoy torturing people. LOL

Author's Response: I am, as Bronzehairedgirl said, sadistic. But there\'sonly one more part. Then all the suspense will be over.

Summary: Emmett and Rosalie throughout New Moon.
Categories: New Moon
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 21722 Read Count: 2538
[Report This] Published: 12 Jan 2007 Updated: 06 Jan 2008
Reviewer: Butterscotch Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 12 Jan 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Part I

I really enjoyed reading more about Emmett and Rosalie. Good job of capturing Emmett's POV!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Summary: Edward is hunting and sends Emmett to keep an eye on Bella. An exploration into Bella and Emmett's relationship.
Categories: New Moon
Characters: Edward Cullen, Emmett Cullen
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4300 Read Count: 1716
[Report This] Published: 18 Jan 2007 Updated: 24 Jan 2007
Reviewer: Butterscotch Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Jan 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Someone to Watch Over Me

I'm glad silly bella convinced you to write. I love Emmett, and you did a great job of portraying him. The part where Bella walks in and finds him in her room was hilarious! Looking forward to your 2nd chapter.

Author's Response: I\'m glad you enjoyed it. I love Emmett, too. And I just couldn\'t resist shoving him into that closet. ;D

Reviewer: Butterscotch Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Jan 2007 Title: Chapter 2: When An Angel Sleeps

I loved this story. What a sweet portrayal of Emmett! Him watching Bella sleep made me laugh. I hope you write more stories in the future.

Author's Response: Thanks! I\'m so glad you liked it. I do have another one I have started.

Summary: When Edward left, Charlie sent Bella back with Renée. But after Bella's husband dies, she returns to Forks with their child. When Edward arrives, how does he respond to Bella's life? And how does Bella's daughter respond to Edward? (And just in case anyone is wondering: Bella is human and her daughter is NOT Edward's. Vampires can't have babies!)
Categories: Alternative Universe
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 69186 Read Count: 39905
[Report This] Published: 19 Jan 2007 Updated: 09 Jul 2008
Reviewer: Butterscotch Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Jan 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Mirage

Another AU story from you?! Fabulous. I love the idea. How ironic that Bella's daughter likes Edward, too. Could make for some awkward mother-daughter conversations, ha. Looking forward to more funny moments!

Author's Response: Awkward... Hmmmm... That word might come up some more. Glad you like this one.