Reviews For Predator
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Reviewer: Gabriel Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2010 2:43 am Title: Pathetic

Apart from 2am in the morning, I enjoyed this uicy tale of death and destruction! Thank you!

Reviewer: RosalieLillian Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2009 9:03 pm Title: Pathetic

hope you write some more... i like it!

Reviewer: Aggie Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2009 6:55 pm Title: Pathetic

I like it. I two think Rose's thought are not in the correct time. I hope you are writing the next chapter.


Reviewer: dsolo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2009 5:48 pm Title: Pathetic

Interesting story, but your thoughts for Rosalie are too modern. For example "hot girl" was not used in the 1930s. I like the last line. Keep up the good work.

Author's Response: this story was told in past tense, rosalie didn't have to be thinking it in the 30s. thanks for the review :]

Reviewer: felix Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 May 2009 11:22 pm Title: Pathetic

nice..keep going

Reviewer: DanceDanceDance Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 May 2009 1:51 am Title: Pathetic

I read this on Twilight Archives, but didn't review. This is really good. Hope read more soon!

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