Date: 29 Mar 2008 3:11 am Title: Chapter 1
Nice job on the mouth. Try as i might, I could never picture it in my head but you've pulled it off flawlessly.
Author's Response: Wow, thank you, so, so much. I'm glad I helped you see her...or captured your vision of her...or something.
Date: 21 Jan 2008 6:25 pm Title: Chapter 1
For me, when I draw, I have to pick a definite point to put a light source. Either in front of her, behind her, or off to one side. Something you can do is stand in the mirror and hold a lamp in a similar position and look to see how the shadows play across your own body. I use myself as a model all the time. Shadows will always follow the contours of the body unless they've been cast by something else entirely. You have a huge amount of potential here, and I'm excited to see how it develops. Hang in there. :)
Author's Response: Thanks =] I'll be sure to take that innot account =]
Date: 21 Jan 2008 5:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
You need to work on your shading a bit. put a little more effort and time into these and they could be great!
Author's Response: Okay =] I think my problem is I have trouble visualizing lightinhg, so I'm not sure where to put the shadows.