Date: 27 Oct 2009 2:37 pm Title: Mind over Matter; Body Over Blood.
Wow! I think you should be writing romance novels. My only criticism would be that I think Edward, being such a gentleman, would try (likely in vain) to stop his fantasies and chastise himself for having them.
Author's Response: Awwwww! I've had a bunch of great reviews from some very prolific reviewers, but I think this is one of the sweetest ones Ive gotten. Thank you so, so, so much for the compliment. I think I'll try to write a romance novel, just because of that now. Haha, it would be very cheesey and cheap. I can see it now. Back to the story that I actually have written, I thought I did make him try to stop his fantasies, but it's been a while since I've read this piece, and I honestly dont remember. Even if I did put in a few things, your most likely right in that it would be canon to have more reluctance on Edwards part. Love always -Ginger Marie Snapp <3
Date: 01 Mar 2009 4:48 am Title: Mind over Matter; Body Over Blood.
You know, I had forgotten about this peice until I just read Fifty Eight Nights. Hmm. I remember where that one line came from. Bella's 18th birthday night. Hmmmm.....by writing this, I am talking to myself. Not unsual... I wonder if Ill edit it....Nah. I just need a new story. Or a real orriginal story that I write myself. I can never finish anything....Sigh. Sizzle Sizzle Sigh.
Author's Response: Oh yes, very stimulating review, ginger. Wow, impressive. Thank you so much. Ha, I am sooooo lame.
Date: 11 Dec 2008 11:17 pm Title: Mind over Matter; Body Over Blood.
LOL, okay, so I had to guess at the meaning of some words due to spelling and laugh at others, but as you said, you've learned your ways. Very interesting moment.
Author's Response: Thanks, Ish. I should probably go over and fix those. Infact, I think I'll do it now.
Date: 02 Dec 2008 5:47 am Title: Mind over Matter; Body Over Blood.
i loved it!!
great writing, very tasteful!
you kick butt!
thanks for sharing! and great tying it into the story.
Author's Response: Awww, thanks. Thats what I try to aim for. I want to make my story feel like it actually happened in the world of twilight, that if SM continued with midnight Sun, this piece would be in there somewhere. (Wouldn't that be just the coolest?)
Date: 08 Nov 2008 5:18 pm Title: Mind over Matter; Body Over Blood.
lol ive always wondered what he did during human moments i kinda always imagined him staring at the wall during human moments and when she sleeping never THAT he's usually so prude!!!!!
Author's Response: Oly to Bella, though. He has so many graphic thoughts in his head that he can never seem to get out, but I can't help but think a few are his own.